㈠ 托福写作范文：挣钱以后是存起来好还是花掉好
希望我的回答能够对你有所帮助。
Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
“Save it for rainy day.” That’s my motto. When I have a choice between spending my money or putting it in my savings account at the bank, I always put it in the bank.I will have a lot of expenses in the future like my ecation, travel, and unforeseen emergencies. I need to have money set aside for these expenses.
Ecation is expensive. I can’t depend on my parents to pay all my bills. I have tuition, room and board, books, and incidental expenses to pay for. I’ll try to get a scholarship to cover some of these costs, but I know I will be responsible for a lot of the expenses. If I spend my money now, I won’t be able to pay for my ecation. I need to save money for my ecation.
Travel is also very expensive. I don’t mean vacation travel. I mean travel to get to and from school. Transpacific airfare costs a lot even special reced fares. I first have to get to school and then, of course, I want to return to my family for important festivals and occasions. Going back and forth will be costly, but worth it. I need to save money for these trips.
Emergencies could arrive at any moment. I might have an unexpected illness while I am at school. There might be costs that won’t covered by the school insurance. One of my family members may need help, I will have to send them money. You can’t predict emergencies like this, but you can be prepared. I need to save money for these emergencies.
When you are not rich, you cannot spend your money carelessly. You must plan ahead. I know in my life, I will have expenses for my schooling and for travelling to and from my home. I know that I will also have unexpected expenses related to unforeseen emergencies. I must be prepared. I need to save money for these events.
㈡ 托福写作范文：挣钱是工作最主要的方面吗
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Yes. Yes. Yes. The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns. When I get a job. I want to earn a lot of money. If I earn a lot of money, people will know I am successful, smart, and a good candidate for marriage.
Money equals success. If I earn a lot of money, I can wear nice clothes, get a big car, buy my parents a nice apartment, and spend a lot of money on my friends. Everyone will know I am rich and very successful.
Earning a lot of money will show people how smart I am, Everyone knows you can't be stupid and earn a lot of money. Who will trust someone stupid to do a job?
When I earn a lot of money, my mother will be able to find me a good wife. She will be able to tell everyone what an important job I have. It will make it easy for her to find someone for me since all girls want to marry a rich man.
I don't care what kind of work I do as long as I earn a lot of money. That's the most important thing for me. Having a well paying job will show everyone that I am successful, smart, and a good catch!
㈢ 求2018年6月10日的托福独立作文真题范文与解析
题目关键解析：题目的正确理解是-求采纳
1假如你是 大学新人 (限定住了 你是新人)
2为了”适应大学生活“并且能”成功“,
3策略A： 在大学校园 开课之前 参加一周的 ”迎新培训“
4 策略B： 每周规律地与学长/姐会谈（同方向 入学已经几年的）
题目的解决要求是：哪一个方式更好，使用理由与事实性细节支撑论证？
此题目的难度在于：在叙述题目主干（新生+为了在大学+适应 以及 成功）的叙述中ETS（故意）叠加了很多限定条件。
开头段满分范例：
（1）Freshman is a person who is confronted with a new environment and has to come up with ideas of creativity and skills of novelty to deal with all challenges . （2）So does a freshman in university. （3）And which way is more parasitical for him to adapt to this new surrounding?（4）Personally ,compared with proposal of getting some instruction at the beginning of new semester ，the counterpart proposal of meeting some experienced fellows of senior grade is much better to facilitate a nice adaptation for new university life and thus boosts his success in many aspects.
第一句：定义法开头
第二句 ：定义词与题目结合
第三句：与题目的Task结合
第四句：主旨句
主体段满分范例：
First， the frequent meeting of the academic issues with the senior students , step by step, will help one to acquire some scientific study methods , making him to overcome the school difficulty more easily ; however , a fixed time of orientation at the very beginning will not forsee and solve those practical and personal problems . (论证展开部分请自行思考)
㈣ 托福写作范文 进步是好的吗
托福写作范文 进步是好的吗
Do you agree or disagree that progress is always good? Use specific reasons and
examples to support your answer.
Who would disagree with the statement “progress is good”? Without progress , there
would be no change. Without progress, there would be no change in our economy, our
standard of living, or our health.
Progress is required to keep the economy moving forward. New procts need to be
developed; new services need to be created. Without progress, our economy would stand still.
There would be no change. Without progress, there would be no supermarkets with fress
proce brought in from all over the world.
Progress is required to improve our standard of living. Our homes today are more efficient
and use less natural resources thanks to improvement in home construction techniques. Our
clothes are warmer and safer thanks to developments in textile manufacturing. Our
ecational system is better thanks to the use of the computers and the Internet.
Progress is required to improve the heath of the world population. Without progress,
there would be no vaccines against deadly diseases like smallpox. Without progress, there
would be increased infant mortality. Thanks to progress, our lives are longer and healthier.
Progress is a natural state. Without it, we would not evolve. Without it, our economy, our
standard of living, and our health would deteriorate. Who could deny the necessity of
progress.
中文翻译：
谁同意“进步是好的”吗？如果没有进步，就没有变化。如果没有进展，那我的经济水平、我们的生活
水平和我们的健康就不会有改变。
进步才能保持经济向前发展。新产品需要开发;新服务需要被创建。如果没有进步，我们的经济将停滞不前。
不会有什么变化。如果没有进步，就没有来自世界各地的超市的三立产品。
进步才能提高我们的生活水平。今天我们的家园更高效，少用天然资源，得益于家庭建设技术的提高。
我们的衣服越来越暖，越来越安全得益于纺织制造业的发展。我们的教育系统的改善是由于计算机和互
联网的使用。
进步才能提高世界人口的健康。如果没有进展，将没有疫苗打击致命的疾病，如天花。如果没有进展，
婴儿死亡率会增加。由于进步，我们的生命更长，更健康。
进步是一种自然状态。没有它，我们就不会发展。没有它，我们的经济，我们的生活水平，和我们的健
康将恶化。谁能够否认进步的必要性。
㈤ 新托福作文范文：是有钱是否代表成功
Since people's criteria for success differ, there is much debate over whether only those who make a lot of money are successful. As far as I am concerned, in today's society that stresses on indivial achievement, money provides the best evaluation of one's accomplishment.
To begin with, as a standardized measurement used for comparing values, money is objective rather than subjective, so it is considered an authentic reflection of one's achievement. As different people hold different understandings of success, assessing the amount of one's earnings has become universally accepted as a rule to measure one's success. Each year, Fortune Magazine publishes a special issue to rank the top 100 most successful people throughout the world according to their yearly income, because there are no other methods to rely on.
In addition, the amount of money one makes is the consequence of one's hard work and talent. To deny the accomplishment wealth brings is equal to deny the sources from which it springs. In the past, I only believed in spiritual values and then leapt rashly to the conclusion that the best thing in life involves no money at all. It is my uncle who showed me the significance of money and changed my opinion. He told me he respected money and made it a goal to strive for in his way towards success. Because he would have to pay a price for it in terms of time, thought and energy. Graally, I came to realize it is the mental and physical labor he devotes in the process of making money that paves his way for self-accomplishment, and thus deserves appreciation and respect.
Finally, money is the most powerful possession in one's lifetime. As everyone knows, success is the ability to do whatever one wants to and to be satisfied with oneself. There is hardly anything that can be done without a certain amount of money. Indeed, with money, one can meet his or her material demand in life, such as taking effective medicines, living in magnificent houses, eating various delicious food, and so on. Also, with money, one can do a lot of meaningful things to benefit others, such as donations to poor people. All these will not only satisfy one's need for personal fulfillment, but also add grandness to one's success.
In conclusion, money serves as a measurement of one's achievement. But we should keep in mind that only those who obtain money by hardworking and use it to benefit the society are really successful.
㈥ 托福写作范文：有钱之后是买房还是做生意
先说买房的问题。我从来就是看好房价的上涨的（大家不要急，我又不炒房），不管是房价在前几年的猛涨，去年的下降，我都坚持这样的一个观点，因为土地毕竟是稀缺资源，用了这一块，就只有另找另一块，国家耕地政策的18亿亩底线放在那里，这说明现在的房地产开发就是开发一块就少一块，用基本的经济学常识，地价只有涨，没有跌的道理。据国土资源部官员的话，土地开发成本占房子成本的30%多，我想在有一些地方这个比例还要高，土地地价都在涨，哪有房子价格不涨的道理，这不是以我们的好恶和意志为转移的。同时，城市化推进、农民工进城、危旧房改造等大规模城市运动，就有大规模的人口需要居所，这是刚性需求，这不可避免刺激房市、推高房价。在前一段时间，房价有一些回落（注意是回落，是在高位降一些），有人就期望房价迅速下降，但事与愿违，房价在企稳后，又开始上涨了。就拿我那位朋友买的房子来说，上半年每平方米就4000元多一点，等到他上个月去买，房价4600元，这个月近5000元了，老百姓买房就是一个心理，就是越涨越买，还害怕买不到了，早买一般情况下（除非经济崩溃）是不会错的，当然，晚买会越便宜也不是没有，关键看你有那个能力估计没有。我认为，结婚要买房时理所当然，而且是必须的，如果你结婚无法买房，也不奇怪，这是每个人的经济实力问题，但你如果想用按揭款去做一定小生意，我认为要慎重，不然后果比较严重。用按揭款做生意，其实就是看上去很美的一件事。香港的经济学家显然没有搞清楚国内的经济状况和广大适婚青年的需求，你有房子住了，就教别人最好拿钱做生意后，再来买房，这个说起容易，但做出来很难。现在年轻人买房，我想80%左右时父母资助的，我们可以算一下，以重庆平均近5000元（主城区）一平方米算，就买90平方米的，就要45万元，首付3成13.5万元。13.5万元，按重庆的人均工资要十几、二十年存，而且按最低消费生活才行，我想现在的青年人一下拿这么多钱买房付首付肯定有，但找人帮忙，肯定是付不了首付的。我上面说的那位朋友，首付十几万都是父母负的，这在现在适婚的青年人身上很普遍的，不是想不想啃老的问题，而是不得不啃的问题。这就出现一个问题，这十几、二十万，你干在不买房的情况下，去做一点小生意，赚了钱在来买？中国内地不少香港，除了江浙一带，大多数省份都没有全民经商的传统，要自己创业，那是难上加难，首先父母同不同意这是关键，其次，你有这个胆量没有？做亏了这么？还有钱可以拿去亏吗？既然是按揭买房，就说明没有多的钱去做别的事情，好多家庭买一套按揭房都是拿出老本来买的。不要说现在经济形势不好，就是经济形势好了，20多万元也只能做一个很小的生意，赚的钱弄不好还赶不上房价上涨的速度，那个时候买还是不买？这是个问题，经济学家哪管平头老百姓的生活呢？除了宏观还是宏观。现在要结婚的成本是很高的，我想对于一般适婚的男女来说，不要说车子、票子，起码要一个安家的房子吧，不要说全款，按揭总要有一套吧，没有车子、没有票子而且还没有房子，要谈结婚恐怕很难，我总认为房价上涨是不可避免的，不管你愿不愿意，这是事实，我想落“房”为安，总比在没有房子还想到用按揭款去做小生意来得实在，生意很多，那个时侯只要有钱都可以做，但房子的价位、地段是很少可以复制的。我的意见，有了可以首付的按揭款就去把房子买了吧，等两口子的家庭稳定了，再谈创业，比较合适，不然房子没有买到，生意也不好做，那才是左右为难的，就只有怨天尤人了。