㈠ 托福寫作範文：掙錢以後是存起來好還是花掉好
希望我的回答能夠對你有所幫助。
Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
「Save it for rainy day.」 That』s my motto. When I have a choice between spending my money or putting it in my savings account at the bank, I always put it in the bank.I will have a lot of expenses in the future like my ecation, travel, and unforeseen emergencies. I need to have money set aside for these expenses.
Ecation is expensive. I can』t depend on my parents to pay all my bills. I have tuition, room and board, books, and incidental expenses to pay for. I』ll try to get a scholarship to cover some of these costs, but I know I will be responsible for a lot of the expenses. If I spend my money now, I won』t be able to pay for my ecation. I need to save money for my ecation.
Travel is also very expensive. I don』t mean vacation travel. I mean travel to get to and from school. Transpacific airfare costs a lot even special reced fares. I first have to get to school and then, of course, I want to return to my family for important festivals and occasions. Going back and forth will be costly, but worth it. I need to save money for these trips.
Emergencies could arrive at any moment. I might have an unexpected illness while I am at school. There might be costs that won』t covered by the school insurance. One of my family members may need help, I will have to send them money. You can』t predict emergencies like this, but you can be prepared. I need to save money for these emergencies.
When you are not rich, you cannot spend your money carelessly. You must plan ahead. I know in my life, I will have expenses for my schooling and for travelling to and from my home. I know that I will also have unexpected expenses related to unforeseen emergencies. I must be prepared. I need to save money for these events.
㈡ 托福寫作範文：掙錢是工作最主要的方面嗎
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Yes. Yes. Yes. The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns. When I get a job. I want to earn a lot of money. If I earn a lot of money, people will know I am successful, smart, and a good candidate for marriage.
Money equals success. If I earn a lot of money, I can wear nice clothes, get a big car, buy my parents a nice apartment, and spend a lot of money on my friends. Everyone will know I am rich and very successful.
Earning a lot of money will show people how smart I am, Everyone knows you can't be stupid and earn a lot of money. Who will trust someone stupid to do a job?
When I earn a lot of money, my mother will be able to find me a good wife. She will be able to tell everyone what an important job I have. It will make it easy for her to find someone for me since all girls want to marry a rich man.
I don't care what kind of work I do as long as I earn a lot of money. That's the most important thing for me. Having a well paying job will show everyone that I am successful, smart, and a good catch!
㈢ 求2018年6月10日的托福獨立作文真題範文與解析
題目關鍵解析：題目的正確理解是-求採納
1假如你是 大學新人 (限定住了 你是新人)
2為了」適應大學生活「並且能」成功「,
3策略A： 在大學校園 開課之前 參加一周的 」迎新培訓「
4 策略B： 每周規律地與學長/姐會談（同方向 入學已經幾年的）
題目的解決要求是：哪一個方式更好，使用理由與事實性細節支撐論證？
此題目的難度在於：在敘述題目主幹（新生+為了在大學+適應 以及 成功）的敘述中ETS（故意）疊加了很多限定條件。
開頭段滿分範例：
（1）Freshman is a person who is confronted with a new environment and has to come up with ideas of creativity and skills of novelty to deal with all challenges . （2）So does a freshman in university. （3）And which way is more parasitical for him to adapt to this new surrounding?（4）Personally ,compared with proposal of getting some instruction at the beginning of new semester ，the counterpart proposal of meeting some experienced fellows of senior grade is much better to facilitate a nice adaptation for new university life and thus boosts his success in many aspects.
第一句：定義法開頭
第二句 ：定義詞與題目結合
第三句：與題目的Task結合
第四句：主旨句
主體段滿分範例：
First， the frequent meeting of the academic issues with the senior students , step by step, will help one to acquire some scientific study methods , making him to overcome the school difficulty more easily ; however , a fixed time of orientation at the very beginning will not forsee and solve those practical and personal problems . (論證展開部分請自行思考)
㈣ 托福寫作範文 進步是好的嗎
托福寫作範文 進步是好的嗎
Do you agree or disagree that progress is always good? Use specific reasons and
examples to support your answer.
Who would disagree with the statement 「progress is good」? Without progress , there
would be no change. Without progress, there would be no change in our economy, our
standard of living, or our health.
Progress is required to keep the economy moving forward. New procts need to be
developed; new services need to be created. Without progress, our economy would stand still.
There would be no change. Without progress, there would be no supermarkets with fress
proce brought in from all over the world.
Progress is required to improve our standard of living. Our homes today are more efficient
and use less natural resources thanks to improvement in home construction techniques. Our
clothes are warmer and safer thanks to developments in textile manufacturing. Our
ecational system is better thanks to the use of the computers and the Internet.
Progress is required to improve the heath of the world population. Without progress,
there would be no vaccines against deadly diseases like smallpox. Without progress, there
would be increased infant mortality. Thanks to progress, our lives are longer and healthier.
Progress is a natural state. Without it, we would not evolve. Without it, our economy, our
standard of living, and our health would deteriorate. Who could deny the necessity of
progress.
中文翻譯：
誰同意「進步是好的」嗎？如果沒有進步，就沒有變化。如果沒有進展，那我的經濟水平、我們的生活
水平和我們的健康就不會有改變。
進步才能保持經濟向前發展。新產品需要開發;新服務需要被創建。如果沒有進步，我們的經濟將停滯不前。
不會有什麼變化。如果沒有進步，就沒有來自世界各地的超市的三立產品。
進步才能提高我們的生活水平。今天我們的家園更高效，少用天然資源，得益於家庭建設技術的提高。
我們的衣服越來越暖，越來越安全得益於紡織製造業的發展。我們的教育系統的改善是由於計算機和互
聯網的使用。
進步才能提高世界人口的健康。如果沒有進展，將沒有疫苗打擊致命的疾病，如天花。如果沒有進展，
嬰兒死亡率會增加。由於進步，我們的生命更長，更健康。
進步是一種自然狀態。沒有它，我們就不會發展。沒有它，我們的經濟，我們的生活水平，和我們的健
康將惡化。誰能夠否認進步的必要性。
㈤ 新托福作文範文：是有錢是否代表成功
Since people's criteria for success differ, there is much debate over whether only those who make a lot of money are successful. As far as I am concerned, in today's society that stresses on indivial achievement, money provides the best evaluation of one's accomplishment.
To begin with, as a standardized measurement used for comparing values, money is objective rather than subjective, so it is considered an authentic reflection of one's achievement. As different people hold different understandings of success, assessing the amount of one's earnings has become universally accepted as a rule to measure one's success. Each year, Fortune Magazine publishes a special issue to rank the top 100 most successful people throughout the world according to their yearly income, because there are no other methods to rely on.
In addition, the amount of money one makes is the consequence of one's hard work and talent. To deny the accomplishment wealth brings is equal to deny the sources from which it springs. In the past, I only believed in spiritual values and then leapt rashly to the conclusion that the best thing in life involves no money at all. It is my uncle who showed me the significance of money and changed my opinion. He told me he respected money and made it a goal to strive for in his way towards success. Because he would have to pay a price for it in terms of time, thought and energy. Graally, I came to realize it is the mental and physical labor he devotes in the process of making money that paves his way for self-accomplishment, and thus deserves appreciation and respect.
Finally, money is the most powerful possession in one's lifetime. As everyone knows, success is the ability to do whatever one wants to and to be satisfied with oneself. There is hardly anything that can be done without a certain amount of money. Indeed, with money, one can meet his or her material demand in life, such as taking effective medicines, living in magnificent houses, eating various delicious food, and so on. Also, with money, one can do a lot of meaningful things to benefit others, such as donations to poor people. All these will not only satisfy one's need for personal fulfillment, but also add grandness to one's success.
In conclusion, money serves as a measurement of one's achievement. But we should keep in mind that only those who obtain money by hardworking and use it to benefit the society are really successful.
㈥ 托福寫作範文：有錢之後是買房還是做生意
先說買房的問題。我從來就是看好房價的上漲的（大家不要急，我又不炒房），不管是房價在前幾年的猛漲，去年的下降，我都堅持這樣的一個觀點，因為土地畢竟是稀缺資源，用了這一塊，就只有另找另一塊，國家耕地政策的18億畝底線放在那裡，這說明現在的房地產開發就是開發一塊就少一塊，用基本的經濟學常識，地價只有漲，沒有跌的道理。據國土資源部官員的話，土地開發成本占房子成本的30%多，我想在有一些地方這個比例還要高，土地地價都在漲，哪有房子價格不漲的道理，這不是以我們的好惡和意志為轉移的。同時，城市化推進、農民工進城、危舊房改造等大規模城市運動，就有大規模的人口需要居所，這是剛性需求，這不可避免刺激房市、推高房價。在前一段時間，房價有一些回落（注意是回落，是在高位降一些），有人就期望房價迅速下降，但事與願違，房價在企穩後，又開始上漲了。就拿我那位朋友買的房子來說，上半年每平方米就4000元多一點，等到他上個月去買，房價4600元，這個月近5000元了，老百姓買房就是一個心理，就是越漲越買，還害怕買不到了，早買一般情況下（除非經濟崩潰）是不會錯的，當然，晚買會越便宜也不是沒有，關鍵看你有那個能力估計沒有。我認為，結婚要買房時理所當然，而且是必須的，如果你結婚無法買房，也不奇怪，這是每個人的經濟實力問題，但你如果想用按揭款去做一定小生意，我認為要慎重，不然後果比較嚴重。用按揭款做生意，其實就是看上去很美的一件事。香港的經濟學家顯然沒有搞清楚國內的經濟狀況和廣大適婚青年的需求，你有房子住了，就教別人最好拿錢做生意後，再來買房，這個說起容易，但做出來很難。現在年輕人買房，我想80%左右時父母資助的，我們可以算一下，以重慶平均近5000元（主城區）一平方米算，就買90平方米的，就要45萬元，首付3成13.5萬元。13.5萬元，按重慶的人均工資要十幾、二十年存，而且按最低消費生活才行，我想現在的青年人一下拿這么多錢買房付首付肯定有，但找人幫忙，肯定是付不了首付的。我上面說的那位朋友，首付十幾萬都是父母負的，這在現在適婚的青年人身上很普遍的，不是想不想啃老的問題，而是不得不啃的問題。這就出現一個問題，這十幾、二十萬，你干在不買房的情況下，去做一點小生意，賺了錢在來買？中國內地不少香港，除了江浙一帶，大多數省份都沒有全民經商的傳統，要自己創業，那是難上加難，首先父母同不同意這是關鍵，其次，你有這個膽量沒有？做虧了這么？還有錢可以拿去虧嗎？既然是按揭買房，就說明沒有多的錢去做別的事情，好多家庭買一套按揭房都是拿出老本來買的。不要說現在經濟形勢不好，就是經濟形勢好了，20多萬元也只能做一個很小的生意，賺的錢弄不好還趕不上房價上漲的速度，那個時候買還是不買？這是個問題，經濟學家哪管平頭老百姓的生活呢？除了宏觀還是宏觀。現在要結婚的成本是很高的，我想對於一般適婚的男女來說，不要說車子、票子，起碼要一個安家的房子吧，不要說全款，按揭總要有一套吧，沒有車子、沒有票子而且還沒有房子，要談結婚恐怕很難，我總認為房價上漲是不可避免的，不管你願不願意，這是事實，我想落「房」為安，總比在沒有房子還想到用按揭款去做小生意來得實在，生意很多，那個時侯只要有錢都可以做，但房子的價位、地段是很少可以復制的。我的意見，有了可以首付的按揭款就去把房子買了吧，等兩口子的家庭穩定了，再談創業，比較合適，不然房子沒有買到，生意也不好做，那才是左右為難的，就只有怨天尤人了。